That Undefinable You

                  That Undefinable You
A girl magnetic, confident and cool
Aspiring to live life..on her terms with no rule...
A personality so magnanimous...a smile so happening
Eyes immersed with purity that are uncessantly shining
She is not ordinary..Her charisma spreads like wildfire
unlike this whole lot
Whose advice she bare sought.

 We all want love..we all crave for
We all want friends...we all fight for
But to earn that love and carry that every bad..
She taught this to me..i dont deserve to be sad
To be a circle she prefer..
Cause the more we'll have end the more we'll suffer
Value every person and consider every heart..
For her thats the issue so alarm.
Every relation should be lived with charm..
I dont know what you are and what you will be?
But i certainly know U are born to rule..
Thats how will always want you to see
I dont know which bond we share..
Dont know what all i admire soo much in you..
Your pious heart, generosity and reverent attitude
Wish you gleam up like Venus..
Raise your life to pinnacle...
U are born to rule
U are born to shine...

Comments

  1. Unknown14 March 2015 at 04:48

    Dude....... super se b upar wala lyk (y) ♡ ;-)

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  2. Unknown14 March 2015 at 05:54

    Sonali hats off to u...
    U r a inspiration to us
    loved dese lines seriously... N d tittle is like cherry on cake.
    Jhakas...;)

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  3. Unknown14 March 2015 at 08:30

    Agreed With #RichaDi .... Its #Inspiring #Motivating #GirlPower , Seems like its written by a #ProfessionalPoetess , I would say that I am too inferior even to praise ur #Magnificence .

    #You_Are_Shining
    #You_Are_Ruling
    #Hats_Off
    #Speechless
    #Flawless

    Sorry, but I am lacking of words , can't even show my gratitude , I would barely say that your command over language simply made me your admirer . #Classy_English

    Pardon Me If there is any mistake .

    I tried my best to show my #Respect to this sort of #Eminence .

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    1. Sonali14 March 2015 at 08:43

      Thanku soo much Pratyush...I'm really flattered...Seems ur words have triggered me to write another post...Very soon i'll come up wid one..

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    2. Unknown15 March 2015 at 04:42

      Mns U also think that I am too inferior :'( (just kidding);-) , U hvnt told me that .. is there any mistake di . :-!:-!:-!

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  4. Sonali14 March 2015 at 10:34

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  5. Unknown15 March 2015 at 09:24

    I am touched by the apt selection of words to describe the confidence and character of a woman.

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  6. Unknown15 March 2015 at 09:25

    I am touched by the apt selection of words to describe the confidence and character of a woman.

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  7. Taru Mishra15 March 2015 at 09:28

    Nicely putten Sonali.....graet going.....keep d gud work up.

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  8. Unknown15 March 2015 at 09:51

    di,i think even pratyush's long applaud iz nt suffient 2 describe d magnificence of dis splendid work.......
    Though u showed it 2 me earlier,bt i don't knw why...bt i literally jumped out of d bed aftr reading dat.......so inspirational......esp. D last 4 lines....
    U r always my mentor......keep motivating us....m glad m hving such a great sis.....

    D next sandeep maheshwari iz here....guyz...

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    1. Sonali15 March 2015 at 10:17

      Pleasure brother...Would love to be called Sandeep Maheshwari..My greatest inspiration :-)

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  9. Unknown15 March 2015 at 13:17

    Nice work girl,keep it up- waiting for d new one, really dis was inspirational one - :-)

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    1. Sonali16 March 2015 at 06:28

      Surely...soon u'll find another. Thanku so much :-)

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  10. Unknown15 March 2015 at 18:27

    Admirable thoughts

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  11. Unknown15 March 2015 at 22:16

    Sonali awesome work, love it...
    Keep it up :-D

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  12. Ankit Awasthi16 March 2015 at 05:59

    that is known as piece de resistance means a perfect blending of law with literature :-) keep going on!

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  13. Unknown19 March 2015 at 01:56

    Fabulous work....a true blend of all kind of emotions of a girl... my eyes got wet while reading... I must say u r born to shine and born to rule... and every girl dererve the same...I wish girls gets inspiration from ur lines... I wish all the gud luck and keep on writing with same confidence and passion...

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    1. Sonali20 March 2015 at 04:47

      Thanku so much...I'm pleased with your words.

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